day tripper

Hey guys! :D I know, it's hereee! Okay, warning: from this chapter on, more sexual and dramatic things will happen. Also, the chapters will start to gradually get longer. Also, ...

Haha this was cute. but, it felt like it all happend so quick. Like, in just a few paragraphs, they were out on the sunset, went to sleep, got up, ...

Alright, this made my jump. haha I knew it was coming but oh so soon made me go OMG. hahha Anywho, You had a few grammical errors in this. Somethings ...

Alright, to tell you the truth this wasn't as good as you usually do. first: My eyes flickered awake to the digital clock flashing at me the time. 8:30 in ...

Okay, so I got your message just as I got on the computer from returning from my one night vacation! d: Alright, I read it and even though you call ...

Well, I haven't read the whole thing, but I must say that this is a definite twist from the Twilight series. It revolves around love, of course, but in the ...

Okay, so yesterday I had this LONG LONG review and everything, ....then my mom erased it): Soo, I can't do one now, but when I'm finished my homework I will(:

I didn't get to finish this but this was very good so far. One thing, please please please make this shorter. It's way too long, maybe cut it up to ...

Fixed it. Thanks!(:

I took this of myself yesterday, it reminded me of some pop cultural 80s thing: and then I took this today, I tried a new hairstyle:

Hey! Yes, I know, it's finally here! It's a tab shorter than the others, but the next one is going to be a lot longer and very dramatic, so it ...

Alright, I'm about to head out the door for a lacrosse game, but I made sure I had time to read this. It was good but confusing at the same ...

Well, this was very good. The detail was purely amazing and even though it was a little short, I loved all of it. I would just say that instead of ...

Ohohoh I love this one. Very neat I love how it reflects. very nice(:

Ahh this is gorgeous, and my obsession for rainbows makes me love this even more since there's a rainbow in it! ahhh i love it!(: